From b8a1a9b94817b86f2a704e16df71c5037e6ef6ad Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Boy <pb@resdigita.de>
Date: Jun 09 2021 05:02:51 +0000
Subject: Added results of review process


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diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc
index 6b9805e..9105302 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ image::Logo_server2.png[Server]
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-Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: 2021-03-28 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34
+Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: 2021-06-08 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34
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 == Our Mission
@@ -29,10 +29,9 @@ Fedora Server is a platform for developers and system integrators, which provide
 
 Currently, we work on several projects
 
-- We are preparing Fedora Server 34
+- We are preparing Fedora Server 35
 - We are working on improving Server's documentation (you currently get a first glimpse)
-- We are exploring opportunities of aligning cloud images and server installation more closely with each other and further harmonizing technical details.
-- Technically we are revisiting defaults ... filesystem / partitioning
+- We are working on facilitating the deployment of key services by combining rpm and Ansible
 
 Stay tuned. The results will soon be visible.
 
diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc
index cc65161..7e96c58 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc
@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen
 :page-authors: {author}, {author_2}
 
-[NOTE]
-====
-Beta 1 – Please comment on server mailing list!
-==== 
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 Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: 2021-03-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 33,34
@@ -19,13 +15,16 @@ Generic basic system administration is covered by Fedora's overall  https://docs
 
 As part of the installation, the system is already fitted with many security-relevant configurations. But some items need manual intervention. 
 
-First of all, the root account needs a key file to enable secure access via ssh. Right after installation, login as root is not possible due to the (public) key file requirement as configured during installation.
+First of all, the root account needs a key file to enable secure access via ssh. Right after installation, a remote login as root via ssh is not possible due to the (public) key file requirement as configured by default during installation. A local password based root login (directly connected  terminal, KVM terminal, but su as well) is still enabled in the default configuration. 
 
 For a number of other procedures, the system manager must weigh the pros and cons and make a decision. This involves, for example
 
-- Installing fail2ban to block IPs with too many unsuccessful logins
+- Depending on protection and confidentiality requirements, system-wide disabling root login (system administration is performed exclusively via user accounts with administrative privileges)
 - Disabling ssh password based login for all users except one (or very few) fallbacks
 - Protecting Cockpit password terminal login capability
+- Installing fail2ban to block IPs with too many unsuccessful logins
+
+For detailed information see https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-server/sysadmin-postinstall/[System Administration – Post Installation Tasks]
 
 == Cockpit
 
diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation-sbc.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation-sbc.adoc
index 6cdf509..a80382b 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation-sbc.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation-sbc.adoc
@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen
 :page-authors: {author}, {author_2}
 
-[NOTE]
-====
-__**– Beta 1 –**__ Please comment on server mailing list!
-==== 
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 Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-05-25 | Last update: 2021-05-25 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34
@@ -191,8 +187,8 @@ Directly at a terminal of the SBC we will make only the minimal, absolutely nece
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 Always complete this step and close with 'c'. Otherwise this installation routine can on reboot again and again conflict with the subsequent configuration.
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-6. Above the user input, a line with the (temporary) name of the computer and an IP address is displayed. The name is "fedora" by default and the IP address depends on the network. Note both carefully.
-7. You can now disconnect monitor and keyboard. The next steps all happen on the desktop.
+7. Above the user input, a line with the (temporary) name of the computer and an IP address is displayed. The name is "fedora" by default and the IP address depends on the network. Note both carefully.
+8. You can now disconnect monitor and keyboard. The next steps all happen on the desktop.
 
 === Final Configuration
 
diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation.adoc
index a962469..ab14571 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-installation.adoc
@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen
 :page-authors: {author}, {author_2}
 
-[NOTE]
-====
-Status: RC – ready for publication 
-==== 
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 Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-04-05 | Last update: 2021-04-05 | Related Fedora Version(s): 33,34
diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-virtualization.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-virtualization.adoc
index 58f4790..83980ec 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-virtualization.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-virtualization.adoc
@@ -2,11 +2,6 @@
 Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen
 :page-authors: {author}, {author_2}
 
-
-[NOTE]
-====
-**Beta 1**! Please comment on server mailing list
-==== 
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 Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-03-31 | Last update: N/A | Related Fedora Version(s): 33,34
diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/sysadmin-postinstall.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/sysadmin-postinstall.adoc
index d7ede83..2674351 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/sysadmin-postinstall.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/sysadmin-postinstall.adoc
@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen
 :page-authors: {author}, {author_2}
 
-[NOTE]
-====
-Status: RC – Ready for publication 
-==== 
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 Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-04-20 | Last update: 2021-04-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 33,34
diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/virtualization-install.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/virtualization-install.adoc
index df9513f..948d2f5 100644
--- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/virtualization-install.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/virtualization-install.adoc
@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen
 :page-authors: {author}, {author_2}
 
-[NOTE]
-====
-**Beta 1**! Please comment on server mailing list
-====
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 Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-03-31 | Last update: N/A | Affected Fedora Version(s): 33,34

