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#45 Install guide errors encountered. https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f31/install-guide/ First Page
Closed by pbokoc. Opened by lsatenstein.

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From the website
The corrections are

Installing Fedora 31 on 32 and 64-bit AMD and Intel
Should be
Installing Fedora 32 onto 32 and 64-bit AMD and Intel

Currrently

This manual explains how to boot the Fedora installation program, Anaconda, and how to install Fedora 31 on 32 and 64-bit AMD and Intel systems. It also covers advanced installation methods such as automated Kickstart installations, booting the installation from a network location, remote access to the installation system using VNC, and system upgrades from previous versions of Fedora. It also describes common post-installation tasks and explains how to troubleshoot common issues related to the installation.

Should be

Installing Fedora32 onto 64-bit AMD and Intel computer systems.
This manual explains how to boot the Fedora installation program, Anaconda, and how to install Fedora 32 onto 64-bit AMD and Intel systems. It also covers:
• advanced installation methods such as automated Kickstart installations,
• booting the installation from a network location,
• remote access to the installation system using VNC, and
• system upgrades from previous versions of Fedora.

A little lower down

The text of and illustrations in this document are licensed by Red Hat under a Creative Commons Attribution–Share Alike 3.0 Unported license ("CC-BY-SA"). An explanation of CC-BY-SA is available at https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/.

Should that be
The text and illustrations in this document are licensed by Red Hat under a Creative Commons Attribution–Share Alike 3.0 Unported license ("CC-BY-SA"). An explanation of CC-BY-SA is available at https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/.

No, Leslie, that's the Fedora 31 version, that's why it says Fedora 31 instead of 32. Version 32 is not out yet, this is the latest version.

The license blurb is correct, it's just legalese. "The text of this document AND the illustrations in this document".
Edited by pbokoc

Metadata Update from @pbokoc:
- Issue status updated to: Closed (was: Open)

Hi Peter,

I have edited and revised the document (150 of 200 pages). My document is geared to Fedora 32. My updates are available. I could paste 100 entries with before after images, since it is the way you requested it to be done (install guide proposal).

Recently I was asking you to invite someone to read/accept/reject the grammar and accuracy of the changes from my libreoffice word document. It is a mouse click actions to do that accept/reject, I did say that I would backport the final changes to the asciidoc files.

My view, is that the Install guide and other documents should be "living documents", similar to wikepaedia, where corrections are shown once you approve them. Corrections to online information should not have to wait for the next release. However, I am again willing to backport my edited stuff to the corresponding asciidoc files.

Petr I have a challenge for you. My 200 page document is within the attache=
d tarfile. (LibreOffice).Can you personally review 20 pages.=C2=A0 You only=
have to look at the markups.
Mark the area to approve with the mouse and right to "accept the change".=
=C2=A0 Send me back the edited stuff and I will mark up the equivalent asci=
idocs.

Regards=20
=C2=A0Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montr=C3=A9al Qu=C3=A9bec, Canada

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On Tuesday, April 14, 2020, 9:47:57 a.m. GMT-4, Petr Bokoc <pagure@pagu=

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pbokoc added a new comment to an issue you are following:
No, Leslie, that's the Fedora 31 version, that's why it says Fedora 31 inst= ead of 32. Version 32 is not out yet, this is the latest version.

To reply, visit the link below or just reply to this email
https://pagure.io/fedora-docs/install-guide/issue/45
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http://thepaulrayner.com/blog/2013/02/14/word-to-asciidoc/
explains how to go from LibreOffice (pdf output) to asciidoc.

Regards=20
=C2=A0Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montr=C3=A9al Qu=C3=A9bec, Canada

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On Tuesday, April 14, 2020, 9:47:57 a.m. GMT-4, Petr Bokoc <pagure@pagu=

re.io> wrote: =20
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pbokoc added a new comment to an issue you are following:
No, Leslie, that's the Fedora 31 version, that's why it says Fedora 31 inst= ead of 32. Version 32 is not out yet, this is the latest version.

To reply, visit the link below or just reply to this email
https://pagure.io/fedora-docs/install-guide/issue/45
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