From 8cf16a680cfa3c8f31b4989f00fda7d2a8a5f2dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Miller Date: Oct 27 2017 17:22:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/6] Make less like a eulogy -- documentation writing is ongoing (and translation will be back soon)! --- diff --git a/index-main.html b/index-main.html index b7845a2..538cc51 100644 --- a/index-main.html +++ b/index-main.html @@ -36,13 +36,14 @@

Fedora Documentation

Fedora documentation describes how to install and use the Fedora operating system and the software packaged by the Fedora Project. The Fedora Documentation Project only maintains documentation for current versions of Fedora. We provide older documentation on this site for historical interest and to acknowledge the generous contribution of time and effort by many, many writers and translators.

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In 1997, Richard Stallman wrote:

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“The biggest deficiency in free operating systems is not in the software — it is the lack of good free manuals that we can include in these systems.”
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Thanks to the many, many Fedora writers and translators for working to correct this.

If you would like to contribute to Fedora documentation, visit the Fedora Documentation Project at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject.

Translations are not current being published because of version 1.0 publishing toolchain limitations. We will be enabling this as part of the next phase. For now, please do not open bugs. Instead, please watch for an announcement that will be sent to the translators mailing list. You may also wish to monitor this issue.

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In 1997, Richard Stallman wrote:

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“The biggest deficiency in free operating systems is not in the software — it is the lack of good free manuals that we can include in these systems.”
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We thank everybody who worked hard to correct that deficiency for previous versions of Fedora.

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Fedora OS Documentation
From 335f9bdcd73054796e27d18187d7d70adff0664b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Miller Date: Oct 27 2017 17:22:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 2/6] heading was redundant on current layout. no need. --- diff --git a/index-main.html b/index-main.html index 538cc51..b0201c4 100644 --- a/index-main.html +++ b/index-main.html @@ -34,7 +34,6 @@
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Fedora Documentation

Fedora documentation describes how to install and use the Fedora operating system and the software packaged by the Fedora Project. The Fedora Documentation Project only maintains documentation for current versions of Fedora. We provide older documentation on this site for historical interest and to acknowledge the generous contribution of time and effort by many, many writers and translators.

In 1997, Richard Stallman wrote:

“The biggest deficiency in free operating systems is not in the software — it is the lack of good free manuals that we can include in these systems.”
From d75613f732124d372df48658b6325e04b4049897 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Miller Date: Oct 27 2017 17:22:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 3/6] make intro much more concise and move bit about old releases to the page where those can be found. --- diff --git a/index-main.html b/index-main.html index b0201c4..78c99ec 100644 --- a/index-main.html +++ b/index-main.html @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
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Fedora documentation describes how to install and use the Fedora operating system and the software packaged by the Fedora Project. The Fedora Documentation Project only maintains documentation for current versions of Fedora. We provide older documentation on this site for historical interest and to acknowledge the generous contribution of time and effort by many, many writers and translators.

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This documentation describes the Fedora Project and how to install and use the Fedora operating system and software.

In 1997, Richard Stallman wrote:

“The biggest deficiency in free operating systems is not in the software — it is the lack of good free manuals that we can include in these systems.”

Thanks to the many, many Fedora writers and translators for working to correct this.

diff --git a/other-releases-main.html b/other-releases-main.html index 28832a8..e970f6e 100644 --- a/other-releases-main.html +++ b/other-releases-main.html @@ -32,6 +32,8 @@

Fedora OS Beta and Older Releases Documentation

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The Fedora Documentation Project maintains only current-release documentation, but we also make older docs available for historical interest and to acknowledge the generous contribution of time and effort by many, many writers and translators.

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You can also find draft documenation for upcoming releases here.

Fedora Beta and Older OS Documentation
From 5ebe98cd86ed41091f242de710f6e164fe3d7aea Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Miller Date: Oct 27 2017 17:24:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 4/6] switch intro and index columns (now index left, intro right) --- diff --git a/index-main.html b/index-main.html index 78c99ec..7219f71 100644 --- a/index-main.html +++ b/index-main.html @@ -33,17 +33,6 @@
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This documentation describes the Fedora Project and how to install and use the Fedora operating system and software.

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In 1997, Richard Stallman wrote:

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“The biggest deficiency in free operating systems is not in the software — it is the lack of good free manuals that we can include in these systems.”
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Thanks to the many, many Fedora writers and translators for working to correct this.

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If you would like to contribute to Fedora documentation, visit the Fedora Documentation Project at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject.

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- Translations are not current being published because of version 1.0 publishing toolchain limitations. We will be enabling this as part of the next phase. For now, please do not open bugs. Instead, please watch for an announcement that will be sent to the translators mailing list. You may also wish to monitor this issue.

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Fedora OS Documentation
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This documentation describes the Fedora Project and how to install and use the Fedora operating system and software.

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In 1997, Richard Stallman wrote:

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“The biggest deficiency in free operating systems is not in the software — it is the lack of good free manuals that we can include in these systems.”
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Thanks to the many, many Fedora writers and translators for working to correct this.

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If you would like to contribute to Fedora documentation, visit the Fedora Documentation Project at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject.

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+ Translations are not current being published because of version 1.0 publishing toolchain limitations. We will be enabling this as part of the next phase. For now, please do not open bugs. Instead, please watch for an announcement that will be sent to the translators mailing list. You may also wish to monitor this issue.

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From 9088ad0c28d8e5678b2d0def9d6880cf25734618 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Miller Date: Oct 27 2017 17:29:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 5/6] The logo wordmark is right to the left of the text, which is redundant. So, instead of saying "fedora(f) Fedora Documentation Site", this says "fedora(f) Documentation' --- diff --git a/index-main.html b/index-main.html index 7219f71..e85853a 100644 --- a/index-main.html +++ b/index-main.html @@ -28,8 +28,8 @@
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Fedora Documentation Site

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Documentation

From 4b5910a8ebfff47f0483988de4198632d85ec81b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Miller Date: Oct 27 2017 17:31:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 6/6] it's 2017. people know that it's a web site :) --- diff --git a/index-main.html b/index-main.html index e85853a..ff98ef1 100644 --- a/index-main.html +++ b/index-main.html @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ - Fedora Documentation Website + Fedora Documentation