From 47761f5a8aa5b4278140292d35f4f4ef7e1a34b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Amy Marrich (spotz) Date: Feb 09 2023 23:32:49 +0000 Subject: Grammar and wording changes --- diff --git a/docs/communication/channels.md b/docs/communication/channels.md index 57eb2f3..d63e4da 100644 --- a/docs/communication/channels.md +++ b/docs/communication/channels.md @@ -2,4 +2,4 @@ The Cloud SIG uses the #centos-devel IRC channel on Libera.Chat for ad-hoc commu See the CentOS IRC documentation for information on how to join IRC. For folks using Matrix we recommend following this guide. -For async discussions and announcements we generally use the centos-devel mailing list. +For async discussions and announcements we use the centos-devel mailing list. diff --git a/docs/communication/meetings.md b/docs/communication/meetings.md index e69e83a..c70cce2 100644 --- a/docs/communication/meetings.md +++ b/docs/communication/meetings.md @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Everyone is welcome to join these meetings, follow the conversation and contribu # Meeting minutes The agenda for that meeting is in [this etherpard](https://etherpad.openstack.org/p/centos-cloud-sig). -Regular SIG meetings are logged and minutes for past meetings are collected in this section. +Regular SIG meetings are logged and minutes from past meetings are collected in this section. ## 2023 diff --git a/docs/index.md b/docs/index.md index aefc3eb..97ab38b 100644 --- a/docs/index.md +++ b/docs/index.md @@ -1,13 +1,13 @@ # Welcome to the Cloud SIG The [Cloud SIG](https://wiki.centos.org/SpecialInterestGroup/Cloud) focuses -on providing differents FOSS based cloud infrastructure applications that -one can install and run natively on CentOS Stream. +on providing different FOSS based cloud infrastructure applications that +can be installed and run natively on CentOS Stream. -We welcome anybody that's interested and willing to do work within the +We welcome anyone that is interested and willing to do work within the scope of the SIG to join and contribute. -This documentation is still a work in progress and we'd welcome any contributions. +This documentation is still a work in progress and we welcome any contributions. For more information about the SIG's charter, members, or goal, see the [Cloud SIG page on the CentOS wiki](https://wiki.centos.org/SpecialInterestGroup/Cloud). @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ For more information about the SIG's charter, members, or goal, see the The Cloud SIG is working on several artifacts, including: -* The RPM Distribution OpenStack (RDO) repositories: these are RPM +* The RPM Distribution of OpenStack (RDO) repositories: these are RPM repositories produced by [RDO](https://www.rdoproject.org/) to deploy OpenStack. * The OKD/SCOS Distribution: this is a SCOS backed version of @@ -29,14 +29,14 @@ The Cloud SIG is working on several artifacts, including: [RDO](https://www.rdoproject.org/) is a community of people using and deploying [OpenStack](https://www.openstack.org/) on CentOS Stream and Red Hat Enterprise Linux. -It aims to build, test and deliver a set of stable OpenStack packages +Its purpose is to build, test and deliver a set of stable OpenStack packages through these repos. The content lives in [mirror.stream.centos.org](https://mirror.stream.centos.org/SIGs/9-stream/cloud/x86_64/) for CentOS Stream 9, and [mirror.centos.org](http://mirror.centos.org/centos/8-stream/cloud/x86_64/) for CentOS Stream 8. -Those repos are published after GA of an upstream release, the content +Those repos are published after the GA of an upstream OpenStack release, and the content is tested and digitally signed. Only stable branches are used, not the one under development (note that if you want to install the one currently under development, you can use [RDO Trunk repositories](https://trunk.rdoproject.org/centos9-master/current/)). @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ $ sudo dnf install centos-release-openstack- Where `` is the name of the OpenStack release you want to install. The [RDO](https://www.rdoproject.org/) community supports the same [OpenStack releases supported by upstream](https://releases.openstack.org/index.html). -Note that we don't archive old repositories. +Note that we do not archive old repositories. For more information about the content of RDO, see the @@ -90,4 +90,4 @@ Current members: - Tony Breeds -Current SIG chair is Joel Capitao and Christian Glombek +Current SIG chairs are Joel Capitao and Christian Glombek